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I had shown this page to some artist back in 2009 at the Stumptown Comic Convention (Portland OR). Their general feedback helped me a lot in the inking. Panel 1 for example uses a lot of little white lines to create the form of the car in the foreground I had to pay close attention to my inking to keep the foreground, middle ground and background  in that spot from getting blurry. I give myself a “C+” on that. To get an “A” it would have been easier to make the truck white but that’s not then the color of my truck. I was determined to have robyn and I in this picture.

The feedback I got is more visible on panel 4. That black area that makes a half circle on the top of the panel used to be white. Aliens hard at work on the BG and our hero first person view hands on the foreground. Not sure I like the rock texture on the last panel.

All in all I enjoy justapoxing the monster’s in the background and the people (panel 1). You’ll see lots of those.  Not so much into over the shoulder monster shots. You won’t see many of those.

This page features all the backstory I have for our monster. Is the last thing it remembers. It may be a little confusing. If you need help. That’s their ship on panel 3. That’s their escape pods on panel 5. Next week our hero focusses more on the present.