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As I examine this story in retrospect I like how simple it is. As you can tell already it is told in 1st person and in a generally progressive pace. Still for some reason it was really hard to write at first. Just getting the pacing to be slow and descriptive.

I tried to imagine what it would be like to visit an alien world. The best approach is to draw from real life experiences.  The firs time you get lost snorkeling in a coral reef and discover all the little life moving to and fro. Heck just think up a time where you sat in a field and took note of all the little insects.

This is perhaps the one page I would like to do over. There  are some elements of the backstory that are not quite clear. They were not important enough to require delay and yet I still think some folks would find it interesting.

The ship here was buried under a mountain. Opening the door created a small land slide. I liked how the moon in the last panel came out.