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Self Critique Time.

By the time I’m finishing the inking on this page I am fairly certain. That I am pretty tired. I think I just had changed jobs or was about to.

I always like the final product flaws and all. Getting it done is what is all about.

That said here is where 2 years of not scrutinizing the work gives me.

• Panel 1 – I would have not done the hatching on the dark side of the 2×4 in the alley and would have made black the garbage bag in the middle of the shopping cart as well as the front mesh of the cart. Those 2 things wold help set the foreground closer since it would be very black vs. the middle ground (outside the alley).
• Panel 2 - I would follow the same “make it black not grey” principle on the garbage can on the bottom right, the garbage in the foreground left and the box. The man in the car seems to small and dark (I should have just drawn the face.  The ghost getting hit seems also too big (face and dark). Again I’m trying to be more observant of tones in foreground, middle ground and background.
• Panel 3 – It’s mostly ok, except for the back seat of the car (should have been plain black not have the lines) and there’s something weird going on near the alley.